Great song
Jeesus fuck Death-9 could you romp on a kids talents any harder? He's 13 years old. All kids 13 years of age have voices like that, its not like he can do anything about it if he wants to sing his own lyrics (to you too, ph0ne).
I however do appreciate the actual critiquing you guys both did. Great critiquing, but that's all he needed, you know? The negative comments could have been left out. Seriously.
Great song, SoD. Keep it up, I wanna hear a remastered version of this song. Take Death-9's and ph0ne's critiques into consideration and apply it to your song. Like ph0ne said: This song has some serious potential.