Oh my fucking god I laughed so hard. You have one of those voices. Those good voices. Those good voices that have an awesome, natural EQ. And no shame. And I loved it so much.
Awesome work. How did you make the synth that starts quietly around 1:10 and cuts in from 1:40 to 2:05? The one plucking side-chained chord one. I want it :3
Awesome composition. The word tyrant comes to mind when I listen to this. Very well done :D
oh my god
Teach me your ways, oh great one!
But seriously that was fucking awesome. Well done. I enjoyed this as much as I do most MoS songs.
Jeesus fuck Death-9 could you romp on a kids talents any harder? He's 13 years old. All kids 13 years of age have voices like that, its not like he can do anything about it if he wants to sing his own lyrics (to you too, ph0ne).
I however do appreciate the actual critiquing you guys both did. Great critiquing, but that's all he needed, you know? The negative comments could have been left out. Seriously.
Great song, SoD. Keep it up, I wanna hear a remastered version of this song. Take Death-9's and ph0ne's critiques into consideration and apply it to your song. Like ph0ne said: This song has some serious potential.
I don't really see the mastering issues. Vocals too loud? Elaborate plz.
That was awesome. I loved it. However I have to be honest and say that the sudden change at 1:24 was a little abrupt. I didn't really enjoy 1:24-1:40 too much, I felt it took the gentle flow away from the song.
Other then that it was absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Hey Nate, thanks for the review!
I actually thought over that spot you mentioned quite a bit. I contemplated smoothing that transition and the following phrase (which has a huge discord) but in the end decided that I liked the slightly shocking effect. I wanted it to feel like having your hopes dashed in a stunning/surprising way. So at any rate, the result was slightly uncomfortable, but it felt more emotionally real to me. Good point though, I actually agree with you there :D
That buildup was really awesome. Good job guys!
funky bass kick
I really love the ambiance in the beginning. It sounds magnificent. Great chord progression, too. I'm not too fond of the the bass kick, though. I think it would sound better if it was a bit more punchy. Put something in closer to the low mid and high mid frequencies to give it that punch.
Also it would be cool if you took the voice over and sliced it up and only put a few parts of the speech in. Just to spice up the beginning, instead of having the entire excerpt flow through the beginning. Maybe put it through a vocoder. It just sounds a bit cheesy to me. That's just my opinion though.
Can't wait to hear the final! Definitely has potential :D
That's some awesome guitar work there, bro! I loved it, to say the least! It reminds me of Pat Metheny's more chill songs. Has a latin feel, for sure.
Did you write it or does it just flow?
Its a francisco tarrega song played in my way, thanks for reviewing!
Bro that was absolutely solid. Awesome job. Very chill. I loved it.
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